Certainly! Here's a revised version of your text with a more polished tone: "Initially, the first interview was broad, focusing on general inquiries without delving into specifics. Prior to the second interview, I was encouraged to research the technologies the company utilized, with the expectation of discussing them during our meeting. Unfortunately, following two rounds of interviews, I experienced a lack of communication from the company, receiving no further updates or feedback. It would have been appreciable to receive a formal notification regarding the status of my application, whether it be a rejection or an indication that the process would not be proceeding further, especially after the conclusion of the second interview."